You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter • give details of your course • explain why you need a week off • say what you want the Principal to do

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter requesting a
week-off
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week off
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by end of
this
month. Let me explain to you in detail about the situation. I am Anna an international student, studying in
2nd
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my 2nd
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year of business administration and residing in
college
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a college
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hostel. I hold 100%
of
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apply
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attendance record right from my
first
year till now, which explains to you
about
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my dedication towards my studies. On 26th January my elder brother is getting married and my family is expecting me to be there; as
this
is the
first
wedding in our family. It has been a while since I have met my family and friends back in my home town. Please be informed that I have made
arrangement
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to receive all the notes and lectures that I will be missing for the week, as
once
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one
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of my friend will email me all of them so that I can be on the same page when I resume back.
Hence
, I request you to approve my request and grant me leave for a week, which is from 23rd to 29th January. Upon your approval will book my tickets back and I assure to report back
on-time
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. Looking forward to your acknowledgement. Yours Sincerely, Anna
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