You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter • give details of your course • explain why you need a week off • say what you want the Principal to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter requesting a

week-off

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week off

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by end of

this

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month. Let me explain to you in detail about the situation. I am Anna an international student, studying in

2nd

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my 2nd

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year of business administration and residing in

college

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a college

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hostel. I hold 100%

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apply

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attendance record right from my

first

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year till now, which explains to you

about

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apply

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my dedication towards my studies. On 26th January my elder brother is getting married and my family is expecting me to be there; as

this

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is the

first

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wedding in our family. It has been a while since I have met my family and friends back in my home town. Please be informed that I have made

arrangement

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to receive all the notes and lectures that I will be missing for the week, as

once

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one

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of my friend will email me all of them so that I can be on the same page when I resume back.

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, I request you to approve my request and grant me leave for a week, which is from 23rd to 29th January. Upon your approval will book my tickets back and I assure to report back

on-time

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. Looking forward to your acknowledgement. Yours Sincerely, Anna

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people argue that technological interventions such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What is the reason ? What can be done to resolve this problem?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard-working and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.