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A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

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People learn and develop throughout their entire lives. I think that in our modern world it is very essential to be familiar with
computer
 technology. So, if I had a chance to give a child a gift it would be a
computer
. I think that
computers
 play an essential role in our lives and they bring many benefits to our society.
Moreover
,
children
 can learn by
use
 of
computers
. In the following paragraphs
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I will give my reasons to support my answer.
First
 of all, by
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se of
computers
children
 can play many games, which help to improve
children
's ability to think logically, think about their
next
 step, etc.
Moreover
, playing games develop many important qualities
such
 as attention, patience, persistent, etc.
Second
 of all,
computers
 help
children
 to learn more about anything by
use
 of
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nternet. They can find new friends even from another country.
Children
 will improve their communication skills, gain more knowledge and experience.
Also
,
children
 have a great opportunity to learn more about other countries, their history, traditions and customs.
Finally
,
computer
 skills can help a child to find his or her
first
 job. A child can find an ad on the Internet about a job offer or he or she can make a resume and place it on the Internet. Personally, I think it is a great experience and a big step forward towards a future career.
In addition
 to those practical benefits,
computer
 technology helps
children
 to do their homework faster. They can type their data into the
computer
, easily check the grammar, correct mistakes and
then
 print it out.
Moreover
, there are plenty of different kinds of educational programs that can help
children
 learn how to read, write, draw and even how to behave and speak a foreign language. To sum up, I believe that
children
 should learn how to
use
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omputer because
this
 knowledge will help them in the future to be more self-confident and enterprising.
Furthermore
,
computers
 can greatly improve and simplify their lives if
children
 know how to
use
 them.
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