Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country’s financial resources. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

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society, money is a driving force for nearly everyone. Most

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aspire to be financially secure and to have the ability to live the life they want.

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, not everyone is able to find paid employment, and for that reason in some countries around the world, governments have initiated a

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where the unemployed receive a regular

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to enable them to survive. Some

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believe it is an excellent idea, whilst others believe that it is exhausting a country’s financial resources. When looking at the positive aspects of

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, it can be said that it prevents individuals from having

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private bankruptcy. When somebody becomes unemployed, he or she will have on-going costs

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as rent for a dwelling, bills for water, telephone and electricity as well as the cost of food and several other things. Without a salary,

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person will fall into debt, because they will be unable to cover these expenses. A national unemployment

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prevent

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person from losing nearly everything over time. Without

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ystem, many

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would become homeless and would potentially engage in criminal activities to survive.

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, one can say that

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is positive.

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stories are heard of

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exploiting the

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, usually the newly unemployed want to find a job fast in order to become financially independent again, meaning that the government does not have to support them for long.

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there are positive aspects of

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, one can

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say that if the

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made by the government is too high, it will prevent

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from looking for work actively. Occasionally, the

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receive is higher than their potential salaries, deterring them from working and creating an on-going cost for the government. A potential solution for

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could be providing free training and employment support to open up new career opportunities with higher income, which would motivate

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group to re-enter the workforce. In conclusion, the unemployment benefits

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has positive and negative aspects. Personally, I believe that the positive effects of the

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outweigh the negative. The

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must remain on a level that helps

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survive without regular salaries, but does not seem attractive to exploit over a longer period of time.