Some people think that public health is a the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Everyone desires better

health

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. It is argued that who is responsible for public

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either

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overnment or the

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. In my opinion, both the authorities and the public have their responsibilities towards the well-being of

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. While

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sedentary

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edantary lifestyle of

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opulation leads to unhealthy eating, the low

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imposed by the states on junk

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and carbonated drinks

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their consumption. In

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esponsibility of

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ass’s

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will be discussed.

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with, in the contemporary world, the

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sedentary

lifestyle

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made

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own place. Now,

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because of laziness, prefer to eat outside rather than cooking at home.

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arge quantity of high gluten

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items

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being consumed welcoming obesity and the other issues.

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, a study done by the University of Cambridge, England eludes that

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who

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junk

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are more obese than

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who prefer

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meals.

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, the habit of eating unhealthy meals leads to the poor well-being of

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individuals.

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, the government do play a role in public

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. Because the authorities do not charge any significant amount of

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on sodas and packed meals which make them easily

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accessible

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ublic.

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,

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low nutritional edibles are being promoted indirectly.

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, a survey conducted by the University of Oxford, United Kingdom shows that

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choose sodas which are cheap

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of

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expensive one.

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,

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overnment should impose significant

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on cuisines which are detrimental

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public

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. In summary, both the states and the citizens have responsibilities toward a healthier nation. Masses should opt

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food

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and the authorities must impose higher

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on carbonated beverages and junk

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