A hundred years ago, people think that human race is steadily improving in every area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we should do more?

Before one hundred years, the entire
of
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nations
' industry had accelerated continuously. Some people argue that
this
statement is no longer suitable in recent years. Personally, I feel that developed society has led to significant improvement in the various field in the
world
such
as economy, literature, and arts. In
this
essay, I will elaborate on these
countries
' positive effects and discuss
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which
nations
must be growth.
To begin
with, the economic powerful regions obviously demonstrates the matter pertaining to the
first
question. As background knowledge, after
the
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world
war II, powerful
nations
had received plenty of economic benefits by
this
war when other
areas
lose their land and citizens. For
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, developed
countries
could transpire amazing improvement without severe competitions
such
as medical or administration development.
Moreover
, those
areas
had affected not only themselves but
also
other poor
nations
for affording valuable skills and disease knowledge.
Therefore
, the powerful
nations
' positive impacts clearly
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an epitome of why I am in favour of that those regions bring
the
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huge promotions around the
world
.
On the contrary
, among poverty
countries
,
India
and South Africa are the major
countries
which are anticipated to fulfil the condition of
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owerful country.
That is
because
,
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those
countries
' growing population and large area have
p
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otential ability to achieve
e
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conomic increase.
For instance
,
India
's large ground used to experiment the cutting-edge public transportation as
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rain. As
this
experiment,
this
nation has received a lot of investment from developed
countries
.
Therefore
,
India
should utilize these subsidies valuable for acquiring the economic hierarchy among powerful
nations
for
world
improvement. As shown,
India
and South Africa area lucidly explains that international
countries
should concentrate on those
areas
. In conclusion,
although
it may seem like that developing
areas
are hard to overcome their situations due to powerful
countries
' force, some specific
nations
such
as
India
and South Africa should try to catch proper opportunities for using their beneficial resources.
Thus
, I feel that already developed
countries
should support other poor
nations
for important advances.
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