Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that educational institutes have been playing an incredible role to educate the students. There have been ongoing debates
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chool should choose learners according to their academic aptitudes or not.
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To begin
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academic
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it is easy for teachers to teach undergraduates. To be precise, if the level of youngsters
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same they can easily learn
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teaching methods because their intelligent level
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same so, they can easily grasp the topics that tutor teach them.
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helps facilitate the teaching process and reduce the pressure for educationist when delivering lessons. On the flip side, the other people have
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ifferent narrative for concern because according to them all the learners do not have same
abilities
as some of them are not good in academics but, they are good in other areas
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arts, music, dance, sports etcetera.
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of learning for themselves if they are not good
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academics
and even organisations might face problems.
In addition
, one can choose their career according to their interest. To epitome, some individuals are captivated in sports so they adopt sports as a profession.
Last
but not least, all the
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average in their
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academics
. To conclude, according to my
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prospective
, organisations should not only select those who are bonzer in
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academics
only but
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appoint those who have different
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problem in future.
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