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Your neighbor has written to you to complain about the noise from your flat. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • Explain the reason for the noise • Offer your neighbor an apology • Tell them what action you will take

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Dear Ms. Jenny, I am very sorry to receive your letter
last
 Saturday night complaining about the noise from my apartment. I am writing to apologize for the inconvenience. Please allow me to explain, my parents celebrated their 40th wedding anniversary and as a thank you for their dedication, I decided to throw a party inviting our relatives and my
parents'
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 friends. As the guests had not seen each other for a long time, they were all very excited at the party; so they sang loudly and even danced, ignoring the fact that it was already late. I apologize once again for the inconvenience. Needless to say, we weren't very thoughtful; but we don't want to disturb our neighbors. I'm sure it won't happen again. If we have to host a party and invite a lot of people, we rent a suitable venue
instead
 of hosting it at home. Yours faithfully , Lisa
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Coherence and Cohesion
To further enhance the logical structure, consider adding transitional phrases between paragraphs to improve the flow of ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion
For greeting and closing, you've done a commendable job. To further improve, ensure your opening sets the context more clearly and your closing summarizes your letter's main points subtly.
Coherence and Cohesion
Maintain one key idea per paragraph as you've done. To improve, elaborate on each idea with more detail or examples for a richer content.
Task Achievement
Your response is complete, but for a higher score, ensure that every part of the prompt is addressed with equal detail and depth.
Task Achievement
Your writing tone is suitable and polite, appropriate for a letter to a neighbor. Try using varied sentence structures to make your apology sound more sincere and heartfelt.
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