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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT STUDYING HISTORY IS A WASTE OF TIME. OTHER THINK IT IS ESSENTIAL TO LEARN HISTORY. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

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Some people believe that learning about the past is useless while other people believe
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 education is beneficial.
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 essay will discuss both views point and give an opinion, why
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 learning is essential. On the one hand, society assumes that
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 is not useful for human beings. It's just a waste of time. They might think
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 because they might believe they don't need the past things and they have to up to date with today modernisation. Even more, they might think rather than learning
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 if they indulged on other things like using computers, playing the video game, and other activities they might learn more and useful. That why for overall development they might think
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 is not necessary, it just futile.
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, on the flip side, people believe
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 plays a key role to get more knowledge about life. It a great source of information where the public's can learn more about past heroes and evident happens.
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, with famous society
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, they can get ideas on how to struggle with the problems and will motivate to do good work for the society and
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.
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,Prithivi Narayan Shah the famous king of Nepal who had United the public and
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 Nepal always motivate the public to live with peace and harmoniously and honest to the
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.
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,
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also
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 confers us about our old tradition and culture which assists to preserve them.
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,
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 is very useful for folk to grab knowledge about the past evident, famous person and to preserve old traditions and culture. In my opinion, the community have to indulge in reading
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 because of its source of information.
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, the population can learn more about the
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 always make them aware of the importance of
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 and the public. Not only
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,
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 always gives our name and fame all over the world. So, reading
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 is not a misuse of time, its wealth for all. To conclude, even though some populace think learning
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 is waste of time, in my opinion,
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 always motivate us to do something for the
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 and be yourself. So,it's not waste it's very useful for getting more knowledge about past things which had happened and bestowed us opportunities to learn more about life and public.
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