some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valueable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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lobalization era, whether sharing as much
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as possible in almost areas is good or it is too necessary and valuable to share
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freely.
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essay would analyze both sides of the issue and give my own thoughts. On the
first
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hand, it is quite clear that sharing possible
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on over the
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has some huge
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the development.
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, it would not only improve the negotiation among nations but
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create a worthy chance for some
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to develop.
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, Japan, one of the most developed
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in
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, shares some cutting-edge technological
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in some aspects
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as agriculture,
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, business, etc… with Vietnam. It helps Vietnam upgrade the quality and quantity of procedures and get higher annual income as a
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.
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, sharing
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among
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could help the
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overcome some global catastrophes
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as Covid-19 pandemic. It would boost the process to make virus test-kit, treatment therapy and vaccine for
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dangerous virus. It means that the whole
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could go through
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pandemic more easily.
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, it is undoubted that some
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is too valuable for sharing. Nuclear weapons could be good examples. Some
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such
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as North Korea, the USA or Russia believe that nuclear technological procedures and
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research
are national secrets. It means that it is too dangerous to share those
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, which could be a huge threat for national
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,among
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.
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, some
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could be the key
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development. What I mean by
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is that the nation which owns the latest technology
data
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could be on top of the
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and get
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numerous benefits
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of free sharing. In conclusion, both sides of
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issue have their own appropriate reasons. In my opinion, I quite believe that sharing
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among
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is necessary for the whole growth of the
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. With valuable
information
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, it could be better to trade with appropriate
data
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to maintain the benefits of
countries
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and improve the negotiation among them.
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