Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The word wether doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
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The singular countable noun point follows the quantifier both, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.
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Your sentence appears to be missing a verb.
It appears that the form of the verb argue does not work with is in this sentence.
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The word secundary is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
The plural verb have does not appear to agree with the singular subject student. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
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It appears that the adjective particular is attempting to modify the adjective good. Consider replacing it with an adverb.
The noun phrase trend seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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The verb learn may be in the wrong form after the preposition to. Consider changing it to the gerund form.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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