Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

In
this
century, many species of
animals
will not be founded after one decade. While some
people
are of the belief that we should take an action to save only those
animals
which give benefits to humans, others think humans should protect all
animals
for the natural balance. I disagree with the idea
that is
selective which
kind
will save, and in my opinion, the protection should be for all kinds of
animals
because any animal on the Earth has its benefit. I will discuss
this
point of view in
this
essay.
To begin
with,
people
who think we should select which
kind
will protect and which one uses to humans are focusing in short term; they believe other kinds of
animals
just created for no reason.
For instance
, according to environment article I read which said that many countries
such
as China tried to kill one
kind
of insects and after that, they surprised of the benefit of
this
kind
of insect.
Thus
,
this
point of view on the wrong side because all species of
animals
will be useful to Earth's environment. On the other side, in my opinion,
that is
right when
people
think we should protect all
animals
and provide them with the proper facilities for the quality of life. a lot of
animals
' right communities, as a prime example, they try to expand the awareness about these issues by making advertisements and collaborate with celebrities.
Therefore
, all
animals
much important to save the environment's balance. In conclusion, I am of the belief that all kinds of
animals
have Its benefit and we should protect them.
Also
, I disagree with
this
view of
people
who say that we should protect only
animals
provide us with benefits.

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