In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this ?.

In some regions of America, a curfew seems to be imposed
although
it has not
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been imposed

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beenimposed
in Japan for many years. There should be from background to impose
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a curfew
curfew

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acurfew
and
this
essay will discuss the pros and cons of it.  
First
of all,
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curfews may
curfew may

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curfewsmay
not be imposed in safe areas. Safe areas mean that the crime rate is low.If teenagers go out at night in an area in which there are many
crimes
happening,they would be involved and be in danger. Because they do not know how to
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protect themselves

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protectthemselves
from the possible dangers of
crimes
.
Also
, it is possible that
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teens might

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teensmight
commit
crimes
due to the fact they are curious about everything and
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they are
they're

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theyare
easily involved with their friends.
In addition
, the high crime rate
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sometimes means

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sometimesmeans
that parent's interest in education is low.
Therefore
children
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get interested

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getinterested
in
crimes
, drugs, rapes, robberies
instead
of studying.
Consequently
,
children
will not get good jobs and will become poor,
then
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will commit

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willcommit
crimes
. So, bad sequences will be repeated. In
such
situations, it
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may be

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maybe
necessary to impose a curfew.  
However
, there may
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be an

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bean
opinion that a curfew should not be imposed. Because it is not a good idea
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to restrict

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torestrict
children
's actions and
children
's freedom should be respected
instead
.I agree with
this
idea to some extent. If a teen is less than 15 years old,they should not be outside after 9 o'clock.
However
, teens over 15 years
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old can

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oldcan
understand what is wrong.  In conclusion, in dangerous areas teenagers might be restricted to go out at night,
however
,
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ages over
aged over

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agesover
15 can be exempted. What is a more important thing is to educate
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people including
people-including

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peopleincluding
parents.
Otherwise
, situations will not change.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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