Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to apply for the post of cashier in your supermarket. I saw your advert in yesterday's newspaper which stated that you have two vacancies for
this
job at your Cambridge location. I completed my graduation in accounting from Conestoga College in Kitchener and since
then
I have been working in the local departmental store. I have handled all types of work in the field of account management at my present organization and I received the award best employee of the year due to my excellent performance. I have a keen interest in the finance sector because It is one of the growth factors of our country, which offers handsome growth opportunities for citizens and organizations.
In addition
, I can
also
work more hours for the supermarket because I live nearby. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Guri
Submitted by Guri on

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