In the past most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

The
places
where
people
live affects greatly their lifestyles and the living
place
is one of the very basic needs for
people
.
People
opine differently while choosing living
places
. Some prefer and argue that the
city
is the best
place
to live since it provides so many advantages over the rural area, but others think that villages are the best
places
to live a good life. Both
places
have advantages and disadvantages. You can not ignore that moving to a peaceful rural retreat can bring you many more advantages that far outweigh in a big
city
.
First
of all, with a small community, it is easier for police to control the number of criminals while the inner
city
which is plenty of inhabitants can be the main cause of the crime rate because of its living conditions.
For instance
, when we live in a small village the burglar can not easily break into our house without being recognized by a villager.
Secondly
, there is fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere for
city
dwellers who desire to live a slower pace of life and closer to nature.
This
may be the best way for them to downshift to a less stressful life.
On the other hand
, a village may have lots of profits but there are some against can be considered.
First
and foremost, many
people
start to leave their hometown and move to the
city
which has adequate employment opportunities. Another aspect is that lack of transport makes travel from
place
to
place
in an isolated area seem to be more difficult than most large cities especially with lazy
people
who hate
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traveling
on their foot. At
last
, keeping all the aspects in mind, we can conclude that living in any part has both benefits and drawbacks,
however
, it’s a great choice to live in rural when we get old
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