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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Newspaper and television are two powerful sources to communicate information to masses. We often wonder how new editors decide on which story will be published and which will be dumped.
Moreover
, with the decreasing quality of
news
,the question has become more relevant.
This
 essay will discuss what influences
news
 and how we don't have become used to bad report these days. On one hand, There are a plethora of factors that influence publishing decisions and these factors have considerably changed over time. Today the newspaper and channels look for content that will drive revenue for their business.
For example
, actors generate more interest in people. Sushant Singh Rajput suicide case was shown on every media twenty for seven when there were actually more important issues that were far more concerning for democracy like coronavirus, economic slowdown and situation of immigrant works.
On the other hand
, We should not be accustomed to
this
 bad
news
 as
this
 not only reflect badly on the
nation
. It
also
 shows how attention is diverted from important topics which don't allow the
nation
 to discuss or ask a relevant question and find a solution to
this
 problem. More good
news
 should be reported so that the correct valuation of a population is maintained and its people are aware of what is happening around them. The good story moves the people in a positive direction as they get motivated and work for society. In conclusion, More thought should be put in what
news
 will be published and relevant information should be given to a
nation
 for a more prosperous and healthy
nation
.
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