Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The wealth gap between the rich and the poor people is widening at an alarming rate globally. While the
first
world
countries
are successfully taking initiatives to reduce the level of
poverty
, the
third
world
countries
are not offering enough help to minimise the misery of
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oor population.
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igh unemployment rate is forcing individuals towards
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poverty
and how
vocationary
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vocational
education
and
government
subsidised businesses can improve the
poverty
status. The advanced nations around the world has many citizens living under the
poverty
line.
For example
, the percentage of homeless people in Australia is about 15% and
this
is mainly due to leaving school
education
early and
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job opportunities.
However
, these
countries
are smart enough to spend a significant portion of the federal budget on social welfare to uplift the living standard of the affected persons. On the
contraty
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contrary
, less wealthy nations spent too much money irresponsibly and run out of budget dramatically.
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,
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angladeshi
government
is willing to invest more money on beautification of roads and reluctant about poor
education
quality and business subsidiaries. The more
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people are educated, the less likely the society will experience
poverty
. If
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overnment introduces free schools for its citizens and implement tax holidays for new start-ups to create jobs, the transformation will be absolutely amazing. To conclude, it is really sad that the rich
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getting richer and the poor is getting poorer in almost every country.
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overnment can ensure a good
education
system to wipe out
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illiteracy
completely and
encourges
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encourages
investors to establish new businesses by offering various incentives. In my opinion, the under-developed
countries
should consult with the developed
countries
and build a partnership to work together to drive away
poverty
and drive business growth.
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