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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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Owing to the growing population, fast and easy way of lifestyle resulting in the crowd to neglect the rubbish
that is
 left behind, especially plastic waste. Though many countries have rubbish management system it is people's responsibility to dump the waste properly to the desired places under the correct way and limit the same. Consumption of moulded items,
such
 as plastic is excessive in the recent years wherein many countries there are no control measures when it comes to the use of single-use carry kit which is hard to destroy and cannot be recycled. The community are used to it to rely on shops and hypermarkets for carrying packet which is mostly single-use polythene and without any limitations. Cheap plastics are used nowadays for almost in all products to meet common day to day life requirements.
Hence
, the authorities must ban these hypermarkets to distribute
such
 non-recyclable packets. Government regulatory bodies should impose a stringent rule restricting the usage of single-use plastics in shops, commercial centres and insist public bring their own carry pack.
Also
, to make easily available of dustbins on all around the public places where garbage are piled up.Import of pollutant cargoes should be screened strictly by the appropriate ministries which will reduce the wastage. Recycling facilities to be built in multiple locations.
For instance
, I have been in Oman for six years and for the past six years there was no restriction to use and throw carry bags. In fact,
this
 became a culture that folks never tend to carry their own pouch for shopping and rely on these shops.
This
 is indeed a great move and should be followed by the est of the world in view to save the world and its future.Hereby, I conclude that it is
also
 an individual's responsibility to avoid carrying of goods that are non-recyclable and to adhere a proper garbage disposal etiquette.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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