In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and dis advantages of giving children this message?

Some
children
have been familiar with a
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quote
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"Life is not easy". They have been taught by their parents that if they want to
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, they must try hard. There are both benefits and drawbacks of teaching
children
by
this
method. Telling
children
to hard work if they want to
acheive
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achieve
anythinh
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anything
is one of the ways to encourage
children
when they have a difficult time doing something. It may make them see their goals and have
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motivation to reach them.
For example
, when I was a child, I worried very much about taking and examination. My parent told me to try hard for a fruitful
result
.
This
made me can see my goal that I got the excellent scores in my exams.
Then
I had a motivation to do the best.
However
, it is undeniable that giving
children
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try hard message
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some drawbacks. One of these is that
children
may feel down when they think they try hard enough as much as they can, but the
result
is completely disappointing.
This
may lead them
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on't want to do
further
anything.
Moreover
, the youngers
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may
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be under pressure because they must achieve by working hard.
As a
result
, they may have severe health problems,
such
as depression
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syndrome
. In conclusion, it seems to be
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children
to try hard if they want to success anything have disadvantages rather than advantages as I mentioned above. In the other hand, parents should teach their
children
to accept the
result
, no matter what it is.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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