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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, a well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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With the advent of globalization, many folks started moving from
one
country
 to another for better opportunities. Some of these countries had their own national
language
. So, Living in a nation where you have to speak a
language
 other than yours might cause a social and practical problem.
This
 essay will discuss living in a
country
 with a foreign dialect does cause problem
initially
 which are reduced later. These days people travel to study or work not just within a
country
 as well as outside the nation. The
first
 time in any
country
 causes initial issues as you are not aware of the culture, food, direction and
language
. With dialect being the most tricky and even if you know the
language
, it is sometimes difficult to communicate with locals and interpret their thought as their accent is totally different. It
also
 causes misunderstanding leading to a predicament. Folk
also
 find it hard to make friends and end up feeling lonely and depressed.
For example
,
One
 of my friends travelled to France and knew a little bit of french but in spite of that he used to mention that it was a daily struggle to get a coffee before his office and was hardly able to make any friends.
On the other hand
, With technology,certain tasks have become easier. Now people don't require other people for the direction they can use google map, ordering food has become easier thanks to the online platform. So the beginner's struggle has easied out a little and even if you don't know the
language
 there are apps for that as well to help you bond and find that
one
 friend.
For example
, App like duo lingo teaches you basic of a
language
 to figure your daily activity in some other nation. To conclude, there are some challenges with moving to a
country
 with different
language
 but it eases out with a length of your stay and with the technology it becomes even easier. In my opinion,I moderately agree that there are concerns but
one
 finds a solution for the same in long term.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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