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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Produce of garbage is increasing every single day.
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 is happening mainly because of the increase in the usage of the
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 that are not recyclable.
Items
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such
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 as
plastic
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 are used widely which
people
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use
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 and throw as it is of no
use
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 later. In
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 essay, I will examine the reasons for an increase in the amount of
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 produced and the steps that need to be taken by the
people
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 in power to reduce its production.
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, the main reason for rising garbage is due to the number of
plastic
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that is
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 being used on a daily basis.
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, in Singapore when we shop groceries from a supermarket, the
items
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 are packed in several
plastic
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bags
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. These
plastic
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bags
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 are thrown after unpacking the
items
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. The authorities should come up with an alternative to
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bags
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such
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 as Jute
bags
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 or a carry bag
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 made of some kind of cloth material.
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, the authorities should create awareness and encourage
people
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 to
use
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 recyclable
items
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 more.
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, the wastage of
food
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-
items
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 accounts for the increase in
rubbish
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 being produced daily.
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, when we are in a restaurant, we order more than what is sufficient and end up wasting
food
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. and the
food
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 often goes into
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ustbin. In
such
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 a case, the concerned ministry should create a team to collect the left-over
food
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 from the restaurants so that the
food
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 can be utilized in a meaningful way.
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,
people
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 from developed countries
use
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 a lot of paper towels in their domestic work which can
also
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 be replaced by other materials that can be recycled. All in all, the government should take decisive steps to reduce
rubbish
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 by increasing the tax on the
items
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 that cannot be recycled and should promote natural ways of reducing
rubbish
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. In conclusion,
people
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 should realise the mistakes and obey the orders of the government in reducing the amount of garbage
that is
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 produced daily. Innovative methods and creating awareness will play a major role in
this
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 process.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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