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Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous.

#situation #adolescents #dogs
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter regarding
a
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 issue which
recently
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 noticed by me at my neighbourhood. Near my residential
area
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 some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing
dangerous
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.
A
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owner
 who is living
next
 to my house is having multiple
pets
 and they are freely moving outside. I have noticed many
they
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ran dangerously towards small kids. An increase in the number of
pets
 is a major concern for me. People do react differently with the
owner
 because of ample freedom. I think we should not wait till any serious accident. Many people who living near
to
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that place
not
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 ready to take action against him because of his angry nature. I think Authority and private groups can share their responsibility. I do not hate
pets
 but my concern is more about
safty
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safety
 and security. With each passing
day
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 I spend a lot of time at home and
this
 situation made my life complicated. There is enough chance for improvement. Please look into
this
 matter seriously. I am writing
this
 letter regarding
a
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an
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 issue which
recently
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was recently
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 noticed by me at my neighbourhood. Near my residential
area
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,area
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 some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing
dangerous
Replace the word
danger
show examples
.
A
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An
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owner
 who is living
next
 to my house is having multiple
pets
 and they are freely moving outside. I have noticed many
they
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apply
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ran dangerously towards small kids. An increase in the number of
pets
 is a major concern for me. People do react differently with the
owner
 because of ample freedom. I think we should not wait till any serious accident. Look forward to seeing you. Yours faithfully, Kailash Kamble
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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