Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter regarding

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issue which

recently

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noticed by me at my neighbourhood. Near my residential

area

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some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing

dangerous

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owner

who is living

to my house is having multiple

pets

and they are freely moving outside. I have noticed many

they

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ran dangerously towards small kids. An increase in the number of

pets

is a major concern for me. People do react differently with the

owner

because of ample freedom. I think we should not wait till any serious accident. Many people who living near

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that place

not

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ready to take action against him because of his angry nature. I think Authority and private groups can share their responsibility. I do not hate

pets

but my concern is more about

safty

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safety

and security. With each passing

day

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I spend a lot of time at home and

this

situation made my life complicated. There is enough chance for improvement. Please look into

this

matter seriously. I am writing

this

letter regarding

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issue which

recently

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was recently

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noticed by me at my neighbourhood. Near my residential

area

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,area

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some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing

dangerous

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danger

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owner

who is living

to my house is having multiple

pets

and they are freely moving outside. I have noticed many

they

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apply

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ran dangerously towards small kids. An increase in the number of

pets

is a major concern for me. People do react differently with the

owner

because of ample freedom. I think we should not wait till any serious accident. Look forward to seeing you. Yours faithfully, Kailash Kamble

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

270 words

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Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this and how it can be addressed?

Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance tech which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?