Some people think that individuals are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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eople sometimes think that leadership is a genius when they were a kid. One the other hand other people say that leaders who spent a lot of

time

to learn personally. I would stand with those who support that we could study any skill to become a wonderful leader.

To begin

with, people think that leadership

skills

is a natural talent for persons who are successful in our life.

For example

, Bill Gates is a famous Hard Vard door-out.

That is

the reason why we see achievements which is one part of his talent.

Therefore

, it is true for cases, if the

first

day of class most of the students who have higher marks excellent communication

skills

and clever faces, sometimes they are monitor to manage all students that class.

However

, genius always is rarely for pieces of life, so I respect persons who suffer for a long

time

to cultivate

skills

to become fabulous leaders. In school

time

, students can take part in activities to improve their

skills

Besides

that, it opens opportunities for soft skill academy and realizes the best leadership. Back in the day, Napoleon is the hero popular with manage talents. He has taken large areas out of his country in the world. It is the reason for studying which could develop a perfect leader in the

time

. To ending and wrapping up my opinion, I appreciate efforts to become an excellent leader.

Although

you have talents, you could improve more and more

skills

widen for leaders honestly.

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