You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • thank your friend for the stay • describe where you left the envelope • ask him/her to return it to you by post
Dear Tim,
I hope you and your wife are doing well. It was great to catch up with you all after a long time,
last
week. I must say that your house was very beautifully decorated and the hospitality was out of the world. Thank you so much for hosting us.
Unfortunately, due to
the last
minute changes in the schedule, I had to rush early and forgot to collect my parcel from your place which enclosed the documents of the new deal.
It was a big yellow envelope with my signatures on it and I last
saw it near the dressing table in the bedroom where we stayed. Another possibility is that while
looking at your library in the basement I would have carried the papers there and left it near the bookshelf.
I would be grateful if you could take a look at the possible locations and help me find them as it holds very critical details about the new assignment. Additionally
, it would be great if you could wrap the envelope to secure it and send too me via speed post to my office address.
I shall be looking forward to your confirmation and hope to see you soon. Many thanks in advance.
Best regards,
RaghavSubmitted by raghavgupta2227 on
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complete response
Try to specify the exact location of the envelope more clearly to avoid any confusion.
logical structure
Maintain a consistent level of detail throughout the letter for a more balanced read.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are perfectly done, creating a friendly and appropriate tone.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a warm, suitable writing tone throughout, making it engaging.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite