You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you will be visiting the town give details of where you will be staying ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment

Dear Trang, I hope you are doing well in a pandemic situation. I’m just writing about my next trip,
that
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which
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I’m so excited
.
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about.
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I am coming to Toronto! My
one week
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one-week
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plan is
at the end
of December. I will first visit the Ramada
hotel
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Hotel
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. They already
make
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all my arrangements for seven days. I will first start to explore the downtown area. I definitely need your help to
hangout
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with you. I know you have some better
suggestion
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suggestions
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for exploration about
this
city. I already booked my entire
week
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week's
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stay at the Ramada Hotel. I got a better discount with full service, so I don’t have to worry about my laundry, food and cleaning services. One more thing, that you
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now expert in cooking to make different Mexican cuisine. I will stay one night with you at your home to look
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house
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the house
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and Canadian culture. That you were mentioned with me. I’ve some questions about which places are better to find historical places, different monuments and restaurants in your city. If you can look to make some better plans for both of us. That’ll be great
to
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both of us for our schedule. It was a nice dropping message to you and I’ll meet you
on
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the Christmas holidays. Hugs, Grace
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task response
Ensure that the letter addresses all the points given in the prompt: explaining the reason for visiting the town, giving details of where you will be staying, and asking for recommendations for evening entertainment.
greeting and closing
Work on using appropriate greeting and closing expressions in the letter to establish a friendly and formal tone.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the content into clear and coherent paragraphs, and make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to inform you that
  • I am excited to announce that
  • I have decided to visit the town where you went to university because
  • I have always been curious about the town, and I thought it would be a great opportunity to explore it
  • I have booked a room at a hotel called
  • I will be staying in the town from
  • I am wondering if you could recommend any
  • fun activities
  • entertainment options
  • popular places to visit
  • restaurants
  • bars
  • clubs
  • concert venues
  • I am particularly interested in
  • local live music performances
  • cultural events
  • art galleries
  • theater shows
  • I would greatly appreciate your suggestions
  • Thank you in advance for your help
  • I am looking forward to hearing from you
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