You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you will be visiting the town give details of where you will be staying ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment
Dear Trang,
I hope you are doing well in a pandemic situation. I’m just writing about my next trip,
that
I’m so excitedCorrect word choice
which
.
I am coming to Toronto!
My Change preposition
about.
one week
plan is Add a hyphen
one-week
at the end
of December. I will first visit the Ramada hotel
. They already Capitalize word
Hotel
make
all my arrangements for seven days. I will first start to explore the downtown area. I definitely need your help to Wrong verb form
made
hangout
with you. I know you have some better Correct your spelling
hang out
suggestion
for exploration about Fix the agreement mistake
suggestions
this
city.
I already booked my entire week
stay at the Ramada Hotel. I got a better discount with full service, so I don’t have to worry about my laundry, food and cleaning services. One more thing, that you Change noun form
week's
have
now expert in cooking to make different Mexican cuisine. I will stay one night with you at your home to look Verb problem
are
about
Change preposition
at
house
and Canadian culture. That you were mentioned with me.
I’ve some questions about which places are better to find historical places, different monuments and restaurants in your city. If you can look to make some better plans for both of us. That’ll be great Correct article usage
the house
to
both of us for our schedule.
It was a nice dropping message to you and I’ll meet you Change preposition
for
on
the Christmas holidays.
Hugs,
GraceChange preposition
during
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task response
Ensure that the letter addresses all the points given in the prompt: explaining the reason for visiting the town, giving details of where you will be staying, and asking for recommendations for evening entertainment.
greeting and closing
Work on using appropriate greeting and closing expressions in the letter to establish a friendly and formal tone.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the content into clear and coherent paragraphs, and make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,