People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, most

people

pursue the YOLO lifestyle (You Only Live Once). In

this

issue, some

people

argue that the public will be going through a hard

time

to balance their workload and leisure

time

. In

this

essay, I will elaborate on the main reason of

this

problem and discuss the best solution.

To begin

with, personal financial condition obviously represents the problem of

this

issue. In fact, most

people

are working plenty of

time

on weekdays.

Moreover

especially, young

people

are inclined to do extra works for accumulating their properties.

That is

because

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they should prepare

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ndividual future plan;

for example

, for wedding, residences, and cars could be

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appropriate

cases.

In addition

, a rise in living expenses is

also

one of the reasons that

people

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in financial situation.

Therefore

,

people

will not able to make a balance between work

time

and spare

time

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their need.

However

, the diversity of workload or commuting

time

is anticipated to tackle

this

issue.

First

, the average

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working hours is fixed according to the government's policy so that the public does not have many choices for utilizing their holidays.

Therefore

, if enterprises afford an opportunity to change employee hours, parents could take care of their children better than before they did and young and elderly

people

could find appropriate living balance.

Hence

, I feel that

this

solution should be

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governments and local corporations as soon as possible for the public's YOLO lifestyle. In conclusion, only

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ew

people

can enjoy their leisure

time

in spite of having a job due to most

people

have

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ersonal financial condition.

However

, if the government implement

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ew policy which includes the variety of working hours, the entire of the public could live in YOLO lives.