The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to have one language in the world?

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people
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that the rapid development of the
tourisum
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tourism
industry around the world will be led
English
to the
next
level. They think that the
English
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will
be the only
language
spoken in the world in near future.
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discuss
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both positive and negative aspect of the argument in details. When considering the development of
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tourism
people
needs to more
knoledgeble
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knowledgeable
about the spoken
english
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English
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otherwise
, they could not able to
intract
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interact
with tourists. Improving the
knowladge
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knowledge
of
english
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could be an extra advantage for
people
who wants to earn extra income. For
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example, if someone wants to work as a tourist guild, he needs to learn
English
quite well so, he needs
to
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extra effort to learn the
language
if he wants to extra money. There are few issues
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rise when
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Considering the negativity of the booming of
tourisum
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tourism
industrie and fear of
English
as a
globale
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global
language
.
First
is that
people
will be forgotten their
mothertone
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mother tone
.
as a result
the culture of the entire nation could
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in
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ext couple of
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generations
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Secondly
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if the anyone
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not interest to learn their mother
language
they
wiil
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will
lost it in near future.
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now almost everybody in
Feji
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Fiji
using
English
as their spoken
language
even if they have their own
language
. So giving priority to only
English
is not works in our ways. In
conclution
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conclusion
, development of the
tourisum
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tourism
and the popularity of the
English
will
increasing
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day by day.
People
should need to aware of it’s both negative and positive aspects.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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