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Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#think #generation #steps #environment
Environment
 depletion is one of the most pressing concerns nowadays. Numerous characters deem
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resent
generation
 should not be concerned
for
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this
 issue;
in contrast
, I completely disagree with
this
 statement. In my opinion, the current mass is solely responsible for the
environment
 they are passing on to their immediate
generation
.
This
 essay will elucidate the supporting arguments substantiating my point of view. At the outset, the lack of concern and
credibality
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credibility
 has lead to serious issues in the
environment
 which cannot be compensated.
People
 tend to misuse
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natural resources, and do not bother about the impact.To illustrate, even though
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overnment has put strict regulation for odd and even days for private transport, still
people
 do not follow them, which leads to pollution and degradation in
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uality of air.
Thus
, it is indeed vital for
this
generation
 to understand the detrimental effects of playing with nature.
On the other hand
,
people
 are more
consious
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conscious
 about there
sorroundings
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surroundings
 nowadays and they understand if they do not put a full stop to
this
 situation ,it may lead to negative effects for the future
generation
. There are many steps undertaken by the mass to compete the alarming situations
such
 as global warming, pollution, and even conservation of natural resources.
For instance
,
people
 are participating in the plantation campaigns organised by certain NGO's where they are planting new seeds every month to enhance afforestation.
Thus
,if all these things were thought before, there would be a chance of a better
envrionment
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environment
 than what we are experiencing currently. To
recaptitulate
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recapitulate
,
although
 most
people
 are unaware of their responsibilities and they tend to ignore the negative impact they put on
environment
, I believe if they follow the aforementioned steps they can create better
sorroundings
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surroundings
 for their future
generation
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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