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Currently, anyone can post information on the internet. Therefore, most t information on the internet might be in accurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Progressing technology and easy access to the
internet
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 have facilitated the process of publishing a post with the click of a button.
This
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 raises a certain question about the accuracy or inaccuracy of published
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.
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 some of the
information
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 might be wrong, I believe that there is
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 beneficial and precise
information
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. The reasons for
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 are as follows. First of all, I believe that the
internet
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 has become an invaluable source of
information
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 for people. In the past, searching for an issue entailed spending long hours at library shelves, now
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, individuals can increase their knowledge of diverse issues.
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, having followed pages related to useful and dangerous foods for the body, followers are likely to be more considerate of what they eat and drink.
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, published
information
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 on the
internet
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 could play a crucial role in decreasing ailments originating from unhealthy diets in society.
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, the existence of some inaccurate or false
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 on various platforms is inevitable. Being permitted to publish an unlimited number of posts has paved the way for abusers who tend to attract more followers by posting
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 untrue news, leading to the readers' misleading and confusion. A salient example of
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 is publishing news about some celebrities’ divorce like Brad Pitta or Angelina Jolly which was not true. These abuses,
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, have resulted in a lack of confidence and pessimism towards other material on the
internet
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. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that
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 encountering incorrect news has become irrefutable,
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 should not prevent users from making the most of the worthwhile
information
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 on the
internet
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. In order to obviate
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 challenge, doing an investigation about studied
information
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 on other pages or websites is advisable.
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coherence cohesion
Try to address potential counterarguments or opposing views to strengthen your argument.
task achievement
Ensure that all examples are directly linked to the main argument, rather than widely known examples that may not add value to the argument's depth.
introduction conclusion present
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relevant specific examples
The examples provided are relevant and help illustrate the main ideas.
logical structure
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