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Psychologists have known for many years that color can affect how people feel. For this reason,attention should be given to color schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement?How far does color influence people's health and capacity for work?

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 is impossible. There is a contentious argument on
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mpact of
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 on people's mind, where few affirm that it actually affects the health and tendency to
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the crucial role
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 play in our lives.
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 have a vital role in affecting the thought process of an
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erson's mood on the basis of
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 they have worn. To Illustrate, someone in a
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 and always hope to see their surroundings in the same fashion.
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, the one who is in grief will always try to make the atmosphere simple and calm by light shades.
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 and wellness of an
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individual
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 therapy.
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psychologists
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, the design mechanism is kept as it should encourage the
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 to concentrate more on
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. So, it is highly a considerable factor in
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ealth and capacity of an
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. To summarize, I vehemently believe that
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 play a major role in our life, and the aforementioned arguments clearly
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 their importance in
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individual's
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