today, the media portrays young people as lazy and disrespectful. do you think this true? Are young people today worse than their parents, or does evry new generation get criticized by older people?

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Globalisation has connected
people
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through numerous platforms, and one of them is media, which has a widespread approach around the globe. And, today the hot topic of almost every news channel is youth, to whom they are representing, as
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who are lazy and disrespectful. In my opinion
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it is untrue, and in the following paragraphs, I will discuss how the new
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is compared and criticised by either their parents or by elder
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with, modernisation has introduced a myriad of lifestyles into the world, which is very different in comparison to the earlier times. And, the approach, followed by today’s
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to live their life, is being portrayed by media in a very rude manner by addressing them as lazy and disrespectful. But, the truth is something else because they do not know what kind of job they are involved in.
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, a person employed in a multinational company has working hours from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm, and he is indulged in a sitting job which he has opted to work from home, and it does not make him lazy person.
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, he can be judged as a hardworking individual by other set of
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.
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, an individual should never be attached with any
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notions which do not describe his personality in a true sense.
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, some news channel’s have
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been displaying the image of youth as disrespectful
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, which is
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not true because knowing and speaking of one’s right does not make a person rude to others.
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, the younger ones today are compared with their parents, and theories have been circulating all over the world that present
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is worse in comparison to their ascendents without any solid evidence behind it.
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, it has been observed that they are
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criticised by older
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for not having the same values as of their elders, and
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is being followed from generations, but irrespective of any comparison between their knowledge from their past generations.
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, to come to a conclusion one must always a solid proof when comparing two different generations. To conclude, I would say that every human being is different from the other, whether he is from the same
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or not.So, the approach of living one’s life can be far different from the other, and we being responsible citizens should not portray one group of individuals in a bad way without any evidence.
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