Managing global environmental issues should be handled by one organization on a global scale. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Climate control is a major concern for many
countries
these days. I completely agree that if international issues
such
as the environment should be solved by the organization
on a global scale is more effective then
individual. This
essay will discuss why I completely agree with the statement.
The first
factor to support my point is, an organization
on an international level is important to view climate problems for each and every country. The population is increasing globally day by day because of population, wastage of industry, such
as chemical, noise from the vehicle
etc. A good example of this
is, 50 years ago, there are very few amounts of vehicle
available in the market. People can afford only one vehicle
per family. Whereas, everyone has a vehicle
nowadays. This
cause air pollution and noise pollution.
The second
factor is, each and every country can participate in this
organization
. The main benefit of this
is teamwork. If developing countries
like India and some small countries
which they do not have enough budget to take more steps against environmental issues
, In this
matter, as a representative of the global organization
other countries
can support and solve this
major problem in a team. If they try to solve this
type of global issues
individually they can do on their own. In addition
, funding is the main benefit of this
organization
.
to conclude, I completely agree that managing international level issues
like environment should be handled by the organization
on a global scale. I would say that this
is the most ideal way to deal with this
major concern.Submitted by ritulsakariya125 on
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