IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8.5

You want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting. write a letter to the person who organised the meeting. In your letter describe the meeting explain the problems with the service suggest what the meeting organiser should do

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to bring to your attention some issues regarding the service that I received at a hotel. Actually, a meeting was organised by your company on 12th April 2024 regarding the launching of a new product and I was there to attend the meeting. The meeting organised by you was very good, unfortunately, the rooms provided by your organisation for meeting attendees were not up to the expected standard.
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 the location itself was picturesque and met my expectations, the quality of accommodation provided by the Hotel Paradise fell short. The interior of the rooms was not in fair condition, even they failed to offer modern amenities. The room which was given to me lacked cleanliness and furnishing. The
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 experience was disappointing,impacting my relaxation. I am reaching out to you to inform you that you should look into
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 matter. I kindly request an investigation into the issues I encountered at that hotel so that future attendees will not face that problem. Thank you for your attention and understanding. I look forward to hearing back from you. Kind Regards, Naina
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea and expand on it for improved clarity.
Task Achievement
Try to incorporate a variety of sentence structures and more detailed descriptions to fully engage the reader.
Coherence & Cohesion
The letter was well structured, with a polite tone and a clear division between paragraphs outlining the purpose, issues, and suggestions.
Task Achievement
The task was fully addressed with a detailed description of the problem and a constructive suggestion for resolution.
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