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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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There is a current debate on how
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 affects people's
skills
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 and customs. Indeed, there is strong evidence saying that
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 has brought to an end some manual
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 and local customs worldwide.
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 is the main factor in
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 trend and why all efforts to stop it is a waste of time.
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 with, I believe that
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 has had an enormous responsibility concerning the end of traditional
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 and ways of
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, robots have replaced thousands of workers that used to do manual goods.
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, even local products are not produced by the local community anymore.
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, they are produced by big companies that have the possibility to lower absurdly their costs and small sellers can not compete.
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, people do not have the same interaction they used to have in the past. To illustrate, local communities do not have weekly meetings anymore and people nowadays interact with each other only through the internet. Unfortunately, there is no possibility to stop
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,
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 will continue to develop and local communities will have to adjust to
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 new way of
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.
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, some communities have already adapted their
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 and traditions to
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 new modern world.
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, they are building new ways of
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 and adapting to
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 recent phase. Indeed, it is better to try to adapt than see all the history being wiped out due to recent changes. To sum up, I believe
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 has changed completely our ways of
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. I suggest that local community try to create new
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 and traditions to adapt to post-contemporary times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Efficiency
  • Global connectivity
  • Cultural identity
  • Diversity
  • Innovation
  • Coexist
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy-intensive
  • Practical skills
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Homogenize
  • Preservation
  • Global diversity
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