IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#world #shortage #food #think #foods
These days,
food
 crises are one of the major issues faced by mankind around the world and to cure
this
 problem, it has been suggested by some that genetically engineered
food
 is a possible solution.
This
 essay disagrees with the statement to produce genetically modified
food
.
Firstly
, changing
food
 genetic reduces or some time vanishes
nutrition
 and
secondly
, these will impact the farmers
business
 negatively. Nowadays, genetically changed
food
 is already placed in a market and it has been speculated that these foods are not even good enough to provide the least amount of required
nutrition
.
Moreover
,
this
 method of producing
food
 by modifying and original form is so that crops or vegetation grows faster due to which they lack in
nutrition
.
For instance
, when I was in a village, we used to get our vegetables, fruits and grains from our own farms which are grown organically were so tasty and full of
nutrition
 that after when I tried genetically modified apple, it was nothing in taste compared to the one I had in our farm. Most farmer
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 still uses organic seedling and it takes time for them to grow. While the wealthy farmer who can afford those seedlings, is able to get their
business
 in the market sooner than those who still use organic seedlings, that how a wealthy farmer still away from the
business
.
Moreover
, foods with inherited genes are cheaper than organic
food
 which will affect normal farmers
business
 negatively. In conclusion, considering all the fact above, genetically modified foods are not a possible solution to the
food
 crisis
Submitted by raj301296 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: