Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
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people
argue that the waste Use synonyms
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this
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should be increased because it can Correct your spelling
materials
devistate
the ecosystem. Correct your spelling
devastate
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their
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waste
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extinct
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be extinct
neglected
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people
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consequntly
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consequently
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companies
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claim that the Use synonyms
authoirites
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authorities
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processes
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may need Use synonyms
alot
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a lot
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recycling
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the recycling
process
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majority
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; Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
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