A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Gonzalo,
Hello! I hope you are doing well, it's been a long
time
since we last
saw each other, so we should go out next weekend to catch up! I have been having a hectic schedule at work and that's why i
wasn't replying to your messages, sorry for that.
In regard to my camping advice, summer would probably be the best Change the capitalization
I
time
of the year to go camping. I know how much you enjoy being in contact with nature, and having a relaxed and peaceful time
, that's why I'm sure you will love it! You will be able to read some books, drink some wine and just rest.
I would say the only thing you may not enjoy is having to sleep in a tent, it's a little bit uncomfortable but remember that it will be just for a few nights! And remember to grab some jackets, even if it's summer, at night is always cold.
I would love to go camping with you, let me know what dates you would be able to go. What do you think about inviting Pepe and Lola, it would be amazing to spend some time
together, the way we used to do it when we were young!
Can't wait to see you! Let me know if you want to catch up next week, any day is ok for me!
Lots of love,
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greeting closing
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Complete response to all parts of the task, with clear explanations and examples.
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Suitable and friendly writing tone, perfect for a letter to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite