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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

#scientists #technology #experts #society #musicians #artists
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In our modern society,
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 some
people
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 believe that
scientists
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 and technology experts are getting more appreciation than musicians and
artists
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, I disagree with
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 belief. The reason is that they are considered idols to many
people
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, and many of them earn high salaries. Many
people
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 consider
artists
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 as
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 models, and
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, they start imitating them. Amr Diab,
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, after his
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 song had gone viral, many
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 started to buy his t-shirt, which he was wearing during the video clip.
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 is due to his huge influence especially, on his fans, and as a consequence, more and more
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 will follow his steps. Another reason is that
Artists
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 usually receive a high salary, which motivates many
people
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 to honour them. In recent days, acting has become one of the highest-paid jobs in the world, since it is recognised as a source of entertainment and motivation for many
people
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.
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 is because if an actor does his
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 well,
people
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 will most likely believe him. which is why they seem very likely to love and respect him. Despite the value of musicians and
artists
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, the
role
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 of
scientists
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 and technology experts must not be neglected. On the other side, few
people
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 argue that
scientists
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 and technology experts might be respected. In fact, they are developing electric cars
instead
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 of those who are using gas. And if
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 happened,
this
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 would save our ozone from decaying. To conclude, I agree with many
people
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 who think that
artists
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 are
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 models and affected by them,
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 they earn a high salary which allows them to improve their standard of living.
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, others assume that
scientists
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 might be more respected because they are developing new technologies which facilitate our life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valued
  • modern society
  • scientists
  • technology experts
  • musicians
  • artists
  • reliance
  • scientific advancements
  • practical benefits
  • driving economic growth
  • daily lives
  • culture
  • human emotions
  • express ideas
  • provoke thought
  • spiritual well-being
  • emotional well-being
  • preserving cultural heritage
  • subjective nature
  • diversity
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