IELTS 13 - Exam 2 - Writing Task 2 Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It appears that the preposition to may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase in today's era. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that well established is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase currently. Consider adding a comma.
The word a way seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
It appears that the preposition on may be unnecessary in this context. Consider removing it.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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