Certain individuals ascertain that a broader age between parents and their offspring is more advantageous then being closer in age. Are the benefits of having more years of separation between parents and children greater than the deficits?

In current generations

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it is much more common to have

children

at an older age than in the past. Previously, most young adults became

parents

in their early to mid-’20s as where these days, many

people

start to have a baby in their late 30

’s

and early 40

’s

.

this

big difference has a significant impact on both

parents

and

children

as well on society. I do not believe that the advantages of a greater age gap between kid and

parents

,

such

as having more

time

and money, necessarily overshadow the disadvantages of having less

energy

and empathy. A positive aspect of being a mature parent is financial stability which in turn

also

provides ample

time

for childrearing.

Parents

in their 30

’s

and 40

’s

have established their careers and make thousands of dollars a month which enables them to provide all of the luxuries for their

children

such

as big home and lots of toys.

In addition

, they are not preoccupied

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spending six

hours

a day on their studies and have

this

time

to interact with their kids. Clearly,

this

benefits their offspring. My uncle and aunt had my cousin Anna at their late 30

’s

after they had graduated from university and hired on a well-payed job, so now they live at the bungalow they bought and have at least 10

hours

a day to bring up their child and buy her many dolls.

Nevertheless

,

this

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advantages do not truly outweigh certain deficits. As

people

get into their 30s and older, they tend to run out of

energy

faster than their younger-aged counterparts.

In addition

, they have a greater generational gap with

children

and

therefore

understand less of their word. As

people

age, they require more sleep and have less active

energy

to play sports or games and

this

means being less effective as

parents

since

children

demand 14

hours

or more

hours

of intense interaction. Not only that

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but as trends and technologies advances, they do not have as much insight into the daily lives of their offspring. Often times, my uncle is arguing with Mike about using a tablet too much simply because he does not understand that

this

is standard for today

’s

youth. In conclusion, the clear benefits of late parenthood are more

time

and money but the negatives are low

energy

and understanding. I do not think that either of the benefits truly is more valuable than the negatives. In respect of

this

,

people

should have

children

when they feel ready.