More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for it? What can be done to solve this problem?

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A growing number of wild
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have found their population almost disappearing while many others have their existence under threat. The prime reason for
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ncroachment of forests by developers and illegal hunting activities carried out by some people. There are certain ways by which,
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harmful practices can be kept in check. The main reason behind the decline of these creatures is the invasion of their territories by
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mankind. In order to provide for the ever-increasing population of people, industries have encroached forests for a variety of reasons.
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has led to the
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being killed either by the lack of food supplies or being killed by the local human population or having to relocate to a new place, wherein, they are unable to adapt and ultimately die.
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examples have been seen in many jungles across the world. Another reason is, individuals that carry out hunting practices often go beyond legal boundaries and hunt specific species of
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for monetary reasons.
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a practice has lead to a rapid drop in the numbers of those creatures.
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, the great Bengal Tiger in India
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finds itself on the endangered list due to years of being killed by humans for different body parts which fetch a lot of money. The two effective solutions to these problems are creating safe havens of these wildlings and keeping tighter restrictions on hunting methods.
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, as cities expand into forests, governments need to make sure safe locations are developed which are identical to the habitat these wild
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have been in and provide for their well-being. Moving them in these locations, greatly improves their chances of survival and boosts the possibilities of their reproduction.
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, strict laws need to be implemented and made sure are adhered to, by people in order to avoid any kind of hunting practices for financial gain.
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way, the endangered species can largely be protected.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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