You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that an article about my hometown which was recently published by you on Trip Advisor magazine contained some false information.
I read the complete piece thoroughly. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same.
However
, the material related to the climate of our city
was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degrees
C, which is not true. In fact, our city
does not get hotter than 28 degrees
C in summers. It is important to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false knowledge can adversely affect the tourism industry. Moreover
, fake data can negatively affect the reputation of our hometown.
I am humbly requesting you to correct the word and republish it in your future prints. In addition
to this
it would be great if you could add a footnote stating that the given advice was false.
I am looking forward to a quick resolution of Add a comma
,this
this
important matter.
Yours faithfully
Surekha Kamble
I read the complete piece thoroughly. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same. However
, the material related to the climate of our city
was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degrees
tumour, which is not true. In fact, our city
does not get hotter than 28 degrees
tumour in summers. It is important to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false knowledge can adversely affect the tourism industry. Moreover
, fake data can negatively affect the reputation of our hometown.Submitted by hKc47$p# on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite