Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages of this?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
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tourism to different parts of our planet. It is undeniable that it //
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activity tourism has become an essential part of our life.
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, some
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guess that an ordinary adventure is not suitable for
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extraordinary men. Surely, there are both pros and cons
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uncommon tourism. but I believe benefits overweight disadvantages. One of the main positives sides of travelling to
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zones is that a human can check
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himself for character, perseverance, and adaptability in various conditions.
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, to fly across
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costs 500USD but to sail across it an
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is invaluable. Another advantage of visiting of the Sahara desert,
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or other dangerous places is to leave exit from the comfort zone. Modern
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live in <greenhouse conditions>. If we cannot check ourselves, we will not know our abilities. A good example here is Phedor Konyuhov, the most famous
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in Russia, who has visited the
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, has flown
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in a by balloon across the Atlantic
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, has sailed on a canoe across the same
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. He demonstrates to us that the capabilities of a human are boundless, and it only depends on our desire and needs meaning. Turning to the other side of the argument, visiting
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the
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areas is are dangerous for life or for the health of
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. Obviously, high temperature and
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humidity in the Sahara desert or low temperature and
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pressure in the
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influence for a human organism. I know a lot of occasions when
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were destroyed in similar adventures. Another major disadvantage is the price of that travel. Choosing
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kind of route we should find out not just safe equipment, we have to think over our actions in emergency cases. Some
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decide to save money economy for while buying their outfits and get many problems during their expedition. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to a conclusion that once in a life every person has to check themselves himself but only after
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appropriate training. Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult,
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as the Sahara desert or the
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? What are the benefits and disadvantages of
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?
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