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Some feel that countries should produce most of the food that is eaten in their country and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#feel #countries #food #country #import
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people are more aware
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edacity
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 even though, commercials do showcase a wide range of
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 launching in the market day by day, now consumers have the source to do research about the commodity before they buy it.
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products
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 quality or performance rather than the information the commercials provide form their flyer.
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first
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we have high tech shops and online search engines which provide us
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all the information that we need in the tip of our hand.
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 not edited on most of the sites which we can relay and trust.
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 not have that much reach in our society
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, and it is no more a thing that audience listen to,
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they have several other
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 how much they care about promotions
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. In conclusion, our present era
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rely
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 only on brands announcement rather than consuming their needs with
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nowledge that they have access to today.
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