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Nowadays, people have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle. Why do think this is? How could this problem be solved?

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Nowadays,
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riority of thing is changed
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a lot
 and it can be witnessed by the present
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scenario
 that most of the people having
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ad lifestyle.
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provide
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pectrum of determining factors behind the plunging interest toward their healthy
food
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. Busy schedule and high competition
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 and the foremost reason behind
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.Everyone is interested more toward having good earning
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 to focus on their eating patterns that what they eat.
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,prefer ready to eat
food
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 easy and take less time or order some junk
food
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, to
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 trendy or to showoff people went outside and enjoy restaurant
food
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,
leziness
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laziness
business
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is also badly impacted
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also
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 badly impact
of
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 human life.
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 as,they just eat and watching tv or do work, did not go for walk and
excercise
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exercise
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, All these reasons bring catastrophic upshot on our health like obesity,blood pressure and many other diseases.To avoid all of
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 we should change our
life style
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lifestyle
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 pattern and
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involve
 more healthy activities like
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 morning walk, get membership in
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lub, and most importantly eat unhygienic
food
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nutshell
,
altough
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although
 it's true that people have
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usy schedule but on a counterpart
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a healthy life is
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 necessary to avoid
health related
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 problems and involve exercise or yoga in your daily routine.
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