Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation cause? What are the possible solutions?
In
this
century, some people
try to make a balance
between work
and home; they want to keep their successful job and enjoy life
with their families
. This
kind of occasions leads to some mistakes and problem. In this
essay,I will discuss these problems
and I will suggest some solutions.
To begin
with, some problems
may happen in this
situation when people
strive to keep a successful career at the same time live a happy life
with their families
. To explain that, any employee who has a prosperous job all time-stressed because he works more time than any other and that put him in a problem with his families
. For example
, these employees were working in Wall street suffered from long work
hours and all way has stress and that lead to divorce and many problems
in the communities. Thus
, many people
suffer from trying to keep successful work
, family balance
.
At the same time, solutions to solve this
problem mentioned above are many and I can suggest that business owners should encourage their workers to work
just 8 hours every day and stay the rest of the day with their families
. In other words
, the main factor to keep the balance
between a happy life
and successful career is to leave the work
early and make an activity with the wife, sons and daughters. That is
clear in countryside families
, for instance
, village communities till now have a stable happy life
and prosperous work
than who live in the city because they just work
for food and family's expenses. Therefore
, anyone who strives to maintain a successful career should focus on the family first
.
In conclusion, people
who suffer from the problems
caused by trying to make work
, the family balance
should focus more to live a happy life
and do not forget that people
work
to life
happy with their family,not the opposite.Submitted by yasseryousefabozaid on
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