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In many countries’ schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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The Behavior of pupil can be seen as a major concern of many institutes from all around the globe. There are many causes of it, from which, I would like to discuss a few of them.
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, I would like to put light on some of the possible solutions which can be implemented in order to adapt the control in an institute, so that
students
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 can behave in a good manner. Nowadays, most schools are facing problems due to student
behaviour
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. There could be many reasons but I would like to discuss a few of them.
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, the most obvious and noticeable reason is the lack of discipline because, teachers are not allowed in many countries to give strict punishment to
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 they cannot talk in harsh tones,
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,
students
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 get easily out of control.
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, if a student knows that he/she will not be punished whatever they do
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 they will not hesitate in showing bad
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 or doing cross-questioning with the tutor. With the increasing number of complaints from teachers found in an institute, the school administration is now concerned about the possible solutions they can take. I would suggest that to overcome
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 particular issue, there is a need for implementing some set rules and punishments for
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 who show bad
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.
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, if a student shows bad
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 to the teacher than they should apologize with the teacher
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. If they don't ask for an apology than they should be given some punishment like suspending from the school or calling there parents, to inform them about their bad
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. In conclusion, the increasing number of complains about
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behaviour
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 can be found in schools across the countries. There are many causes of it, from which the most significant one can be the lack of discipline and almost no strict punishments. The only solution that I would recommend is the implementation of some punishment if the pupil is not guilty of his/her bad
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 so that the discipline could be maintained.
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