Some people prefer to live in hot climates. Whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a certain group of
people
who prefer summers.
However
, mainly tends to live in the
areas
of
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orld that are mostly low in
teamprature
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temperature
. Humans who are used to warm
climates
and like sunny days prefer summer whereas, others like winters. I would support both kind of
people
as in my opinion, humans adopt
weather
, of which, they are mostly used to. There can be of multiple reasons
of
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inhabitants choosing to live in warm
climates
then
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the cold
ones
.
However
, looking at some major causes, the
first
and foremost that tickle into my mind is, the place of birth of a
person
and where he/she has
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their most of life.
For example
, If a
person
is born in
a
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area where there is mostly hot
weather
and sunny days
,
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than
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this
person
is less likely to
bare
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the extreme cold
weather
.
Therefore
,
s
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ame is the case with
people
that are
found
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of cold
weather
likely to live in
areas
where there is mostly winter because they can bear the cold but not the hot
weather
. In my opinion, both
people
are free of choosing
there
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lifestyle and can choose whatever they are more comfortable with.
For example
, if there is a
person
who is born in
notherean
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northern
areas
and
spend
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most of his life there
then
it would be hard for him/her to settle in an area with mostly hot.
Furthermore
,
s
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ame is for
people
who are likely to live in
areas
where there is low
temprature
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temperature
. These
people
can
also
not bare the warm climate. In conclusion to
this
, a few
amount
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of
people
tend to live in warm
climates
whereas, remaining like to spend there lives where the
temprature
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temperature
is quite low and
mosly
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mostly
most
have winters. I consider that both kinds have there
own
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likes and priorities, the
ones
that are found of summers and like sunny days are the
ones
that spend most of there life in warm
areas
.
However
, the humans that are used to cold weathers, are the
ones
who
likes
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snow or cold
weather
and is used to
such
climate. In my opinion, it is the choice of a
person
wheather
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whether
they want to live in
areas
with warm
climates
or the
areas
that are mostly cold.
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