You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address.

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

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letter

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to address the missing

card

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from the received

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from one of your bank's branch

office

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located in Orlando, Florida. I am worried that that missed new

card

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might be misplaced while in the transit of the

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or I will be relieved to know that if a new bank

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has been missed from your end to post it along with a

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, request you not to cancel

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current

card

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of mine as you have mentioned in the

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,receiving

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post, your present

card

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will be deactivated within 5 days. I would suggest that if the new bank

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has been missed from your end to post it, please, I would have you

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repost the

card

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, if possible, before the stipulated time of the current

card

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, or else , extend the deactivation time of my current

card

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, if the new

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is lost in

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transit, you would have to make sure that the new

card

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is rescinded and reissued to me. I look forward to hearing about your immediate action. Yours sincerely, Nancy William.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

191 words

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