Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this.

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. Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that the information published in your newspaper about

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10, California

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, is not correct. I was born and raised in

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and I am familiar with the modern infrastructure of

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city

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. My father

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works in the

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council and

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, our family have in-depth knowledge about the town. It was published that

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10 have a water purification plant

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recycles and provides clean water to the inhabitants. Unfortunately,

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information is not true. I believe there could be a typo error because

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plant is situated in

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01 which is one of the pioneer towns of our

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. Kindly correct

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information in your newspaper’s archive.

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, I would request to publish a correction note on Monday’s paper so that the audience could be brought out of any confusion. I look forward to your prompt action in

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matter. Yours faithfully, Megan Smith.

ALISat Jan 23 2021

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

169 words

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The Greeting

More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you return home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. -Explain the problem. -Say why the documents are important. -Suggest a solution.

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