Some people say that teachers should be paid according to how their students learn. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education plays an important role in one’s life so as
teachers
.
Teachers
build the base of education when we are kids till we end up studying at the university. Some people believe that
efforts
of teaching
students
should be valued by paying according to how much the
students
learn from
teachers
.
However
, I definitely believe that it is unfair to pay
teachers
like that because it will create discrimination among the
students
in the
class
,
students
will lose their opportunity to widen their knowledge from their
professors
in areas other than the
test
syllabus, and
teachers
do not have control selecting the
students
for their
class
.
To begin
with, if
professors
or
teachers
are paid according to
students
learning, they will be unfair to the
students
who are below average in their performance. These
students
need more attention form
teachers
as it takes more time to learn things for them as
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to other
students
. If
professors
are paid according to
students
’ grade, they will try to focus on bright and average
students
who can get the high
score
easily.
Thus
this
will create discrimination among the
students
, and
students
who require more help from their
teachers
will stay behind in their
class
.
In addition
, if
teachers
are getting money according to
students
score
, they will teach them the material which will be on the
test
. They will not waste their time teaching them about the topics that are not related to the exam. For an instance, when I was in 12th grade in India, we had the board
test
and I joined the
class
of the professor to prepare for the
test
. It was a private institute, the professor was paid on our
score
. The professor was teaching us only for the topics which are important for the
test
in that
class
. I often went to him if I had any questions, and he explained
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me in details if he was free, but in
class
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he taught us only exam oriented syllabus.
This
is because he was paid on the
students
’ grade
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the board, and we lost our chance to learn the topic in details.
Thus
this
will narrow down the
students
’ opportunity to widen their knowledge from their
professors
.
Last
but not least,
teachers
do not have
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hoice to select the
students
for his
class
. The school or college decides the
class
size and
students
for his
class
. If in one
class
, most of the
students
are smart, they will get
the
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high
score
with
less
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efforts
.
However
, if one
class
is full of mediocre
students
,
over all
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score
for that
class
will remain low
instead
of teacher’s great
efforts
.
Thus
we cannot decide
teachers
’ skill according to
students
learning. To sum it up, some people think that
teachers
should be paid according to
students
’ learning. I totally disagree with that because
teachers
will differentiate their
students
according to their intelligence,
students
will not get chance to broaden their knowledge from their
teachers
, and
teachers
do not choose
students
for their
class
so their
efforts
will not be valued properly.
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