Some people say that teachers should be paid according to how their students learn. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education plays an important role in one’s life so as
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build the base of education when we are kids till we end up studying at the university. Some people believe that
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of teaching
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should be valued by paying according to how much the
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learn from
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.
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, I definitely believe that it is unfair to pay
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like that because it will create discrimination among the
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in the
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,
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will lose their opportunity to widen their knowledge from their
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in areas other than the
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syllabus, and
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do not have control selecting the
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for their
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with, if
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or
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are paid according to
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learning, they will be unfair to the
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who are below average in their performance. These
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need more attention form
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as it takes more time to learn things for them as
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to other
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. If
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are paid according to
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’ grade, they will try to focus on bright and average
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who can get the high
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easily.
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this
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will create discrimination among the
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, and
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who require more help from their
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will stay behind in their
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, if
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are getting money according to
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score
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, they will teach them the material which will be on the
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. They will not waste their time teaching them about the topics that are not related to the exam. For an instance, when I was in 12th grade in India, we had the board
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and I joined the
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of the professor to prepare for the
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. It was a private institute, the professor was paid on our
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. The professor was teaching us only for the topics which are important for the
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in that
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. I often went to him if I had any questions, and he explained
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me in details if he was free, but in
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he taught us only exam oriented syllabus.
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is because he was paid on the
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’ grade
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the board, and we lost our chance to learn the topic in details.
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this
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will narrow down the
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’ opportunity to widen their knowledge from their
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but not least,
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do not have
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hoice to select the
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for his
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. The school or college decides the
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size and
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for his
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. If in one
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, most of the
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are smart, they will get
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high
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with
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efforts
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.
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, if one
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is full of mediocre
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,
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for that
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will remain low
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of teacher’s great
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.
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we cannot decide
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’ skill according to
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learning. To sum it up, some people think that
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should be paid according to
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’ learning. I totally disagree with that because
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will differentiate their
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according to their intelligence,
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will not get chance to broaden their knowledge from their
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, and
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do not choose
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for their
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so their
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will not be valued properly.
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